Philip Athans

Philip Athans – Editor

Former managing editor at Wizards of the Coast, working extensively in fantasy, SF, horror, thriller, literary, and narrative non-fiction.

Overview

“The world of publishing is growing more complicated, but also more interesting for those willing to think outside the box. I know I am, and having Phil Athans out there as a resource takes the scare out of it.”

—R.A. Salvatore, author of The Legend of Drizzt

It's not just my job to find what's wrong with a book, but to preserve and encourage what's right about it.

No two manuscripts, and no two authors, are exactly the same. No two edits will be either. So what do I look for when I start an edit?

Everything.

And I mean literally everything from big-picture issues like story structure and worldbuilding to grammar and usage, always with your unique goals and your unique voice in mind.

I’ve worked with a wide range of publisher, author, and other clients including Pixar Animation Studios, Adams Media, Simon & Schuster, Penguin Random House, Amazon/57 North, Pyr, Appalachian Mountain Club Books, Wizards of the Coast, Permuted Press, and almost too many indie authors--at all experience levels across a range of genres and categories--to count.

I’ve worked extensively in fiction (primarily fantasy, science fiction, and horror, but other genres as well), non-fiction (from books on the software industry to camping and kayaking guides), gaming (digital and tabletop), and more.

I've been working in publishing in one role or another since 1986 and as a full time editor for every day of the past 30 years.

IF IT’S GOT WORDS, I CAN HELP MAKE IT BETTER.

I'm proud to work with LGBTQI+, POC, indigenous, and all other human authors. I will not work with "AI"/LLM/ChatBot-generated text, nor will I ever use "AI"/LLM/ChatBot "tools" in any step of your edit.

Services
Fiction
Epic Fantasy Gaming & LitRPG Horror Space Opera
Languages
English (UK) English (US)

Work experience

Wizards of the Coast

Sep, 1995 — Jun, 2010 (over 14 years)
I had primary responsibility for the strategic and tactical goals of a multi-million dollar adult and children’s trade publishing enterprise. I created or was instrumental in helping create several brand identities, including the Discoveries and Mirrorstone imprints, led a cross-functional team with representatives from all areas of the company, crafted marketing and sales communications for both consumer-facing and business-to-business strategies, worked with licensees in everything from audiobook creation to electronic gaming, managed P&Ls, scheduling, and other aspects of getting products into the marketplace, and led a staff of professionals through complex and unforgiving workflow demands.

Self-employed

Sep, 2010 — Present
Founder and sole proprietor of a creative services consulting agency, specializing in all aspects of transmedia expression and brand development, such as creative IP development, branding, licensing and distribution, and recruiting. My specific skills in this agency include writing and editing; traditional, e-book, and audiobook publishing; marketing communications (consumer-facing and B2B); copywriting; advertising; and marketing.

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Angry Hornet Nest

Brooks, Stoney

River-Lily Publishing

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Heiress of Lies

Yuzawa, Tomoko

Tomoko Yuzawa

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Echoes of Ghostwood (The Warminster Series)

Hilliard, J.V.

Dragon Moon Press

Developmental Editing
Flower World

Biscuit, Baxter

Independently published

Developmental Editing
Realms Of War (Forgotten Realms Anthology, 12)

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Wizards of the Coast

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Jaga's Bones

McHardy, Simon

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Last Dragon

McDermott, J.M.

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Entangled Lives

Omer, Imran

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The Last Arcenaux

Puglia, George

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Philip has 25 reviews

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Denis M.

Denis M.

Dec, 2025

As someone without any experience in literary writing refining my story into something worthwhile was a daunting prospect. Philip's expertise was exactly what I needed. Not only was I able to refine the story but I now have a stronger foundation to work from in the future.
Justin G.

Justin G.

Nov, 2025

Working with Phil has been amazing. We started off with an introductory meeting and right away, I could tell he was someone who truly cared about his craft and would put his passion and thoughtfulness into his edits. He kept in touch throughout the process and when the edits were due, he delivere...
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Edward K.

Edward K.

Nov, 2025

Philip is amazing! His background and attention to detail were exactly what I was looking for in an editor for my project. His knowledge in the fantasy genre helped point me in the right direction in several areas for the revisions I needed. He opened my eyes to new possibilities and avenues to e...
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Tomas D.

Tomas D.

Nov, 2025

I really enjoyed working with Philip. He was prompt, communicative, and very helpful. I would work with him again in a heartbeat and would recommend anyone who is looking for a good editor to consider him. He was able to correct and help guide my story into something that is better than I thought...
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Daniel S.

Daniel S.

Oct, 2025

Philip Athens is a legend. Having the opportunity to work with him has been such a boon for my project. He provided valuable insight and suggestions that has improved my writing significantly. It's been such a great experience.

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